Monday, April 2, 2012

the sweet small clumsy feet of April came


 
Today I listened to a compilation CD called “When a man loves a woman”, and there were some great renditions including those familiar soulful songs by Percy Sledge and Otis Redding (who’d been loving her too long/to stop now).  And today I decided to add a couple more poems by another man whose lyric love has always moved me.  The first speaks to any of us who have tried to capture in words what cannot be captured, and the second is one of the loveliest extended metaphors I know.

And so, for your reading (and viewing and listening) pleasure, here’s the work of the inimitable lower case edward estlin cummings, known as e. e.  Read first:


If I have made,my lady,intricate

If I have made,my lady,intricate
imperfect various things chiefly which wrong
your eyes (frailer than most deep dreams are frail)
songs less firm than your body's whitest song
upon my mind--if I have failed to snare
the glance too shy--if through my singing slips
the very skilful strangeness of your smile
the keen primeval silence of your hair

--let the world say "his most wise music stole
nothing from death"--
                    you only will create
(who are so perfectly alive)my shame:
lady through whose profound and fragile lips
the sweet small clumsy feet of April came

into the ragged meadow of my soul.


somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond

somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond
any experience,your eyes have their silence:
in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me
or which i cannot touch because they are too near

your slightest look easily will unclose me
though i have closed myself as fingers,
you open always petal by petal myself as Spring opens
(touching skilfully,mysteriously)her first rose

or if your wish be to close me,i and
my life will shut very beautifully,suddenly,
as when the heart of this flower imagines
the snow carefully everywhere descending;

nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals
the power of your intense fragility:whose texture 
compels me with the colour of its countries,
rendering death and forever with each breathing

(i do not know what it is about you that closes
and opens;only something in me understands
the voice of your eyes is deeper than all roses)
nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands 

Here and here and here are links to readings of somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond, the first by a young, probably Israeli, soldier, the second by cummings himself, and the third by a man whose voice I feel I know but whose name I don't.  
Enjoy. 
 



2 comments:

  1. I have been looking for the second poem of e.e. cummings that you quote for years. When I first came to Turkey I heard a song by a folk group called Yeni Türkü which I loved (actually I love a lot of their songs). The lyrics of the song were credited to e.e. and I have been trying to find the poem ever since. The words they sing, I see now, are only a partial translation of the poem (stanzas 2, 4 and 5) and it's the last line of the 5th stanza that gives the song its title (Yağmurun elleri, the hands of the rain). This is why it was so hard to track down the original. In spite of the cuts I think the music does justice to the spirit of the poem. You can find it on YouTube here:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YNy8rLZ8V8k

    Thank you RF,

    GE

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  2. Thank you, GE, for your comment. It makes me very happy to know that a mystery has been solved and that you can now proceed through the entire length of extended metaphor to reach that wonderful final line.

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